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Watch it through a foggy window
Keep yourself alive
Did the heroes disappear
From this fragile life?
Goddesses, they walk among you
Walking on the nails
Grinding down the bones that hold you
Nothing stands you up

We take the blame
The hurt
The pain that you feel
Why don’t you die already
We know you’ll always heal

Back in the corner weeping
Tears upon the tiles
Grind your teeth and break your jaws
And still you’ll feel a smile

Nail me to the ground
Nail me to the wall
Watch me hurt
Watch me die
As you just grind away

Grind away (we see your face)
Grind away the hours
Till your bones are only dust
In the wind
I had a melody in my head and wrote down some lyrics. Writing lyrics is fun.

Hope you enjoy this.
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xXEmptyAngelXx Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I know how that feels. =D
Happens to me a lot, too.
I swear, we could probably write our own songs and be famous like that, or summtin'.
Anyways, this is WAY better than anything I could wing.
Seriously.
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Post-Mesmeric Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Famous huh? Well, the future never knows. :D
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xXEmptyAngelXx Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
And big dreams can only be that, dreams.
Lol, I guess we'll see.
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Post-Mesmeric Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
lol perhaps.
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maliciousguile Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
well sir! it seems you have quite a gift for words as well! (: your writing is very powerful indeed, and though this maybe a bit conceded, i think i can identify with your state of mind when writing this.


kudos! (:
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Post-Mesmeric Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Conceded? Nah...it helps knowing that someone gets my mindset when I write.

:)
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GothicWolf69 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009
I love it :)it sent chills to me
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sinsorrow Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Gave me chills. :)
It would be interesting to hear this with the melody you had in mind <3
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sucker-for-a-mohawk Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2009
I like it.
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Gothity Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2009
aww, sad, i like it tho...
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